ABASISTA
bahya jagata ru bichhirna ebe mun
prema ru/ pranaya ru
patha ru/ pantha ru
pada ru/ padma ru
padya ru/ upapadya ru
baki au kan achhi mo pain
kebala tama chhada.........!
prema ru/ pranaya ru
patha ru/ pantha ru
pada ru/ padma ru
padya ru/ upapadya ru
baki au kan achhi mo pain
kebala tama chhada.........!
First of all thank u for ur precious comment..2nd ur poem also lovable...Mu kaha tharu copy kare nahi..that is my vision..my innovative..thank u for ur comment...
ReplyDeletethanx sukanti for ur compliment about mu writnings.sorry for my remarks about ur lines...mu kahinki semiti vies deli, se katha bodhe ati bhala bhabe apananka kabita tale thiba comments box re lekhichi...
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